11 August 2017

Supertitles

by Philippa Wehle

[I’ve just posted reports on two foreign-language plays, both part of this summer’s Lincoln Center Festival.  One, While I Was Waiting, was in Arabic and the other, To the End of the Land, was in Hebrew—and both employed supertitles.  (My reports on these plays were posted on 1 and 6 August, respectively.)  I’ve often complained about how this device is used in theaters here, a common phenomenon at international festivals like LCF and the Next Wave Festival at the Brooklyn Academy of Music.  Usually they’re placed so that a spectator like me can’t read them and watch the actors at the same time—or even alternately.  That was the case with To the End of the Land—though While I Was Waiting handled the matter differently, putting the supertitle screen on stage as part of the set.  Waiting included a two-level platform and the screen was located at the half-way point so it was just beneath the feet of the actors on the upper level or just over the heads of the actors on the stage level—perfect for reading the text and watching the actors at the same time.  (Another frequent problem, especially with what Philippa Wehle calls “language based plays,” is that the text goes by in the supertitles too fast to read.  Below, Wehle ponders the need to translate the whole text.)  My friend Diana, with whom I often go to shows, passed on going the the Lincoln Center Festival this year because she didn’t want to contend with supertitles.  Diana’s an opera fan and she often remarks that opera houses like New York’s Met have small screens embedded in the backs of each seat so that patrons can read the titles right in front of them.  No playhouse that I know of does this, probably because, unlike opera, theater repertoires don’t regularly include foreign-language performances.  (I also presume the technology is expensive to install.)  

[I came across Wehle’s two short essays on supertitles while I was writing my report on While I Was Waiting and I downloaded them to keep in reserve for reposting at an appropriate time.  I think that’s now, with the Syrian and Israeli play reports just published on Rick On Theater.  The first article below was originally published on  The Theatre Times, a New York website, on 26 October 2016 (https://thetheatretimes.com/musings-on-supertitles/).]

“MUSINGS ON SUPERTITLES”

Thinking about how to make supertitles more friendly, more accessible to an audience that is anxious to know what is being said in French or Italian or Lithuanian (as was the case with the stunning piece I saw in Avignon this summer, Didvyriu Aikste, directed by Kritian Lupa),  but also how they can enhance the experience of the play.  I recently saw two shows that used them efficiently and differently with great success.

Romeo Castellucci’s Go Down, Moses at Peak Performances in Montclair [New Jersey], began with a scrim behind which we could see the players walking back and forth and exchanging bits of conversation in Italian, of course.  Later a Mother, the main figure in this piece, is being interrogated by a police inspector who speaks very fast as does the Mother.  Instead of supertitles overhead or on the sides, they were on the scrim and clearly part of the performance, not a separate entity.  The scrim is used throughout the play not only to distance us from the performance but also as a location for the supertitles.  Of course, Castellucci’s shows are mostly wordless.  They are visceral experiences rather than linguistic, but it is still important to understand what the woman, who painfully delivers a baby in a public toilet, whom she names Moses, is talking about. For example:

“We are close, so close to a new beginning of the world

. . . How can we say this to the poor?

They are fated to toil.”

It is fantastic to be able to watch her and see the words on the scrim at the same time rather than having our eyes leaving the stage to look upward and our necks aching from an hour or two of trying to keep up with action and words.

The other show was Letter to a Man, Robert Wilson’s piece created for Mikhail Baryshnikov, seen at BAM [Brooklyn Academy of Music] on Wednesday, Oct 19 [2016].  Baryshnikov is wonderful as always. His dancing is so elegant; his presence throughout is electrifying.  From time to time, fragments of text are heard, either in Russian or in English.  “I am not Diaghilev.” Or “I understand war because I fought with my mother-in-law.” These are excerpts from Nijinsky’s diaries written when the great Russian dancer was losing his mind and was put in a mental institution by his wife.  The words we hear are voiceovers recorded by Robert Wilson, Baryshnikov and Lucinda Childs.  When they are heard, we also see them written as supertitles.

We hear “I am not Christ. I am Nijinsky.” In Russian, then in English and back to Russian, spoken by Baryshnikov in audio fragments, repeated over and over.  These phrases add essential layers to the drama of this man whose mind is deteriorating. We may not know Russian but the English translation follows immediately and then comes the Russian again. This is fascinating to me. I’m wondering if the art of creating supertitles couldn’t learn from this.  I’m just dreaming but instead of whole sections of a dramatic text in English projected up on a screen, for example, could there be shortened versions with the English on one side and the translated language on the other?  The audience for Wilson’s play was filled with Russians the night I saw it.  I have a feeling they must have been hearing the English as well as the Russian just as I was and perhaps feeling a melting together of both languages to add an exciting cultural dimension to the experience.

Of course, I realize that both of these pieces are mainly visual and physical, and that the problem remains as to how to successfully create supertitles for language based plays without translating every word.

MORE MUSINGS ON SUPERTITLES

[Wehle’s second article on supertitles was posted on The Theatre Times on 24 December 2016 (https://thetheatretimes.com/more-musings-on-supertitles/).]

“Knowing two languages doesn’t make you a translator any more than having ten fingers makes you a pianist.”  Unknown wise person

I have recently been asked to translate an important book on the subject of supertitles in the theatre. Called Guide du Sur-titrage au théâtre, and published in 2016 by the Maison Antoine Vitez  International translation center in Paris. Written by Michel Bataillon, Laurent Muhleisen and Pierre-Yves Diez, i[t] is a fascinating and thorough presentation of the principles and practices of creating the best possible supertitles. Along with answers to questions such as “Are supertitles absolutely necessary?” there is practical information about how to set them up on Power Point frames, in terms of length and number of lines per slide, dialogue and punctuation.

I love the authors’ comments such as “It’s a mortal sin to put any information on a frame that has not yet been spoken by the actor.” It’s hard enough for the audience to read the translated words that are zooming by. So please don’t confuse them.

Elsewhere the authors make it very clear how important the job of sending the supertitles onto the screen is. It is preferable that the translator of the titles be the same person as the one who sends the titles.  He or she is in charge of making sure that the comic or emotional effects hit the right spot.  There is nothing more disturbing to performers and directors than to hear laughter or a gasp after the delivery. To achieve an optimal result, the translator must attend rehearsals and consult with the author and the director as well as the performers.  Imagine a show that lasts for two and one-half hours. The person in charge of sending the slides sends about 2,000 titles during that time. The least mistake will be noticed. Needless to say, it is a very hard job and it is not often sufficiently acknowledged. As translator both from English to French and French to English over the past several years, I have been amazed to discover that my name is not on the credits not to mention that a theater company has used my translation without permission.

Another matter that concerns me is the question of how to downsize the original text without offending the author. First and foremost, it’s important to collaborate with all of the artists involved not just the playwright.  I’ve been fortunate to work closely with very helpful artists whose plays I have had the pleasure of translating.  I insist on a close collaboration even if the artist is in Zagreb and extremely busy.   For example, I worked with Kenneth Collins on three of his shows.  These words from him in an e-mail are typical of the kind of response I’ve had from all of the artists with whom I’ve worked:   “In terms of cutting words, it is really a case by case basis,” he wrote. “Some stuff I feel is important to the nature of what is being communicated . . . some stuff, clearly not so much.  Do you want to talk on the phone and walk me through what you would like to cut? . . . Then I can determine if I feel they take away from what I’m trying to say or not.”

More musings:

The wonderful Tiago Rodrigues, head of the Portuguese National Theater in Lisbon, who is a playwright, performer and director extraordinaire, performs his shows in Portuguese, of course, but also in French and English. No need for supertitles with Tiago.  It’s fun to think of how many people get to see his shows in a language they understand without the need for supertitles.

Talking with a friend the other day about the thorny problems of supertitles, she volunteered that she had finally seen Hamilton. To prepare for this exciting event, she bought the CD and listened to the lyrics because she knew that even if the company is singing in English, she wouldn’t follow them as well as she wanted to. Fascinating, I thought.

I’ve been in theaters where the translation of a text for a show in a foreign language is handed out to the audience in advance.  A good idea, I think, but it frequently doesn’t solve the problem of a fuller experience of the play. Either heads are down, reading the text, or the translation is read later.

[These posts were written by the author in her personal capacity. The opinions expressed in these articles are the author’s own and do not reflect the view of The Theatre Times, its staff or collaborators.

[The Theatre Times is a non-partisan, global portal for theater news.  With more than seventy Regional Managing Editors around the world, it aims to be the largest theater news source online.  In addition to its original content, The Theatre Times filters through more than eighty sources, around six hundred articles and thousands of pages of theater news every day.  Combining premium content with ease of use, The Theatre Times provides a high-performance experience that readers can trust.  Curating a steady stream of the top theater information, The Theatre Times is a leading destination for theater audiences and professionals worldwide.  Facilitating global, transcontinental collaborative models, and generating opportunities for interaction and creative development amongst a wide network of international theater artists, The Theatre Times asserts the importance and impact of theater as one of the oldest and most universal forms of human expression.

[Philippa Wehle, an editor and translator, is Professor Emerita of French Language and Culture and Drama Studies at Purchase College, State University of New York. She writes widely on contemporary theater and performance and is the author of Le Théâtre populaire selon Jean Vilar (Actes Sud, 1991 and 2012), Drama Contemporary: France (Performing Arts Journal Publications 1986) and Act French: Contemporary Plays from France (PAJ Publications, 2007). She has translated numerous contemporary French language plays (by Marguerite Duras, Nathalie Sarraute, Philippe Minyana, José Pliya, and others). Her latest activity is translating contemporary New York theater productions into French for supertitles (ERS, Kenneth Collins, Jay Scheib, Basil Twist, Okwui Okpokwasili, Tina Satter, Christina Masciotti, and Andrew Schneider). Dr. Wehle is a Chevalier in the French Order of Arts and Letters.]

06 August 2017

'To the End of the Land' (2017 Lincoln Center Festival)


When the Lincoln Center Festival brochure came out last April, there were two shows that caught my attention.  One was While I Was Waiting, a Syrian play about which I was just curious (for reasons I delineate in my report, posted on 1 August).  The other, however, was a title I immediately recognized from a very enthusiastic review from the Jerusalem Post by my friend Helen Kaye: To the End of the Land, an adaptation by Hanan Snir (who also directed) of a 2008 novel by David Grossman (published in English in 2010 by Alfred A. Knopf).  In her review (included in “Dispatches from Israel 8” on Rick On Theater on 12 September 2016, http://rickontheater.blogspot.com/2016/09/dispatches-from-israel-8.html), Helen called the play To the Edge of the Land (the original Hebrew title is Isha borachat m’besora [מבשורה בורחת אשה], which Helen translated as “A woman fleeing tidings”—though I’ve seen many various translations), and she wrote that the play was a “phenomenal, unforgettable, illuminating, wrenching evening at the theater.”  She ended her review with the pronouncement: “To the Edge of the Land will keep you on the edge of your seat.  A must see.”  It’s not a sentiment I was likely to forget, and though Helen added, “Just for that it deserves an English version,” I never anticipated it’d show up here.  When it did, however, I checked back with Helen and when I asked if she’d recommend seeing it, she said, “Oh absolutely.”  So I immediately decided to go and in May booked a seat on Helen’s recommendation. 

To the End of the Land, the eighth co-production of the Ha’Bima National Theatre and the Cameri Theatre of Tel Aviv, opened at the Ha’Bima in Tel Aviv on 20 February 2016 and then at the Cameri on 25 February; the production alternated between the two theaters, playing to sold-out houses, and then toured Israel.  In 2017, the adaptation won most of the top awards at the Israel Theater Prizes: Best Original Israeli Play, Best Production, Best Director (Snir), and Best Actress in a Leading Role (Efrat Ben Zur), but the play has reportedly distressed some Israelis who’ve lost children to war or terrorism and others have been reluctant to see it.  (“People were very moved by the play in Israel, they cried, some felt shock, they felt identified with the characters.  Once people here [that is, the U.S.] identify with it, only then it can become universal,” reported director-adapter Snir.)  The North American premiere of To the End of the Land (which we’ll see generated its own controversy) ran at the Gerald W. Lynch Theater, John Jay College of Criminal Justice, part of the City University of New York, from 24 to 27 July 2017; I saw the 7:30 performance on Wednesday, 26 July.  The performances were in Hebrew with English supertitles.  (See my report on While I Was Waiting for a brief profile of the Lincoln Center Festival and the Lynch Theater.)

The avant-garde Ha’Bima National Theatre gives expression to the revolutionary spirit of the Jewish people through the revival of Hebrew culture and language.  The origins of the Ha’Bima (also spelled Habima, meaning ‘the stage’ in Hebrew) go back to Bialystok, Poland, in 1912; it was reorganized in Moscow in 1917 when a company of Jewish theater enthusiasts—all Hebrew teachers—was formed.  At the time, when the study of Hebrew was forbidden, this group was determined to found a professional avant-garde theater troupe, focusing on plays on Jewish themes, often performed in Yiddish.  The company soon attracted the éminence grise of Russian theater, Konstantin Stanislavsky (1863-1938), who made the Ha’Bima one of the studios affiliated with his Moscow Art Theater.  (Many of the company’s productions were directed by MAT’s Evgenii Vakhtangov, 1882-1923.)  In 1931 the Ha’Bima moved to Palestine and opened in Tel Aviv; it became the Israel National Theater in 1958 and was granted state support.  Its Tel Aviv venue, where it presents new works and classics in Hebrew, affords a home for creativity and an incubator for playwrights, directors, actors, and designers.  The Ha’Bima also welcomes artists from abroad and has represented Israel in a variety of theater festivals around the world.

Founded in 1944, the Cameri Theatre of Tel Aviv is Israel’s largest theater, staging up to 12 new productions annually amounting to more than 2,000 performances a year in the theater’s five auditoriums.  The Cameri has produced some 500 productions at home and on tour and keeps 20 shows in its repertoire.  The company employs 80 actors, and its productions are staged by directors from both Israel and abroad.  In addition to the Lincoln Center Festival, the Cameri has performed at leading theaters and festivals worldwide, including the Brooklyn Academy of Music, Barbican in London, Hannover Expo, Washington Shakespeare Festival at the Kennedy Center, Gdansk Shakespeare Festival, National Center for the Performing Arts (The Egg) in Beijing, and Moscow Theater of Nations, and more than 100 international tours with other productions.  The Cameri’s yearly international theater festivals recently included Robert Wilson’s The Three Penny Opera and Arturo Ui from the Berliner Ensemble, Volksbühne (Berlin), Schaubühne (Berlin), Deutsches Theater (Berlin), National Theater of Norway, National Theater of the Czech Republic, Public Theater, National Theater of China, Shakespeare’s Globe (London), and more than 70 other theaters worldwide.  The company’s productions have won more than 120 awards, including the Israel Prize for Lifetime Achievement and Special Contribution to Society and the State of Israel.  This year, the company received an honorary fellowship from Tel Aviv University for its singular contribution to Israeli culture for its repertoire and for nurturing excellence in theatrical performance.

On the night I went to Land, the scene entering the Lynch Theatre with the heightened security was more like getting onto an airplane than into a theater.  This was all because of the protest by Adalah-NY: The New York Campaign for the Boycott of Israel, a proponent of the Boycott, Divestment, Sanctions (known as BDS) movement against Israel  in opposition to the country’s treatment of the Palestinians.  Some 60 noted theater artists, including actor-playwrights Tracy Letts and Wallace Shawn, playwrights Lynn Nottage and Annie Baker, director Andre Gregory, and writer-actress Greta Gerwig, signed a letter calling for the Lincoln Center Festival to cancel the production of To the End of the Land because it’s partly sponsored by the Israeli government.  (Support for the production came from Israel’s Office of Cultural Affairs in North America.) 

Lincoln Center rejected the demand.  “As a cultural and education organization,” said Lincoln Center president Debora Spar in part in a statement, “. . . we are committed to presenting a wide variety of artistic voices and trust that the art we bring can stand on its own.”  (A New York Times article about the controversy is at https://www.nytimes.com/2017/07/05/theater/artists-protest-lincoln-center-play-backed-by-israel.html, in case readers are interested.  There’s a lot of other coverage of the protest, as well as some responses, on the Internet as well.)  Free-speech organizations such as the National Coalition Against Censorship supported the Lincoln Center stand on presenting To the End of the Land under its umbrella.

A few yards from the entrance to the theater on 59th Street, there was a barricade across the sidewalk manned by a cop who stopped each pedestrian to ask if she or he was attending the play.  Then at the foot of the steps leading up to the front of the building from the sidewalk was an LCF staffer with the evening’s will-call tickets (theatergoers who had their tickets with them had to show them) to be sure everyone entering was a bona fide ticketholder.  (I doubt there were any spot tickets available—the house was full as far as I could see and the Forward reported that the run was sold out—and I don’t know what LCF did to deal with non-ticketed potential theatergoers.)
                                           
Just inside the entrance, there were CUNY security officers with metal-detector wands who checked bags and purses and metal objects that set off the indicators.  This created a bottleneck, of course, so the audience was still entering the auditorium at 7:35 and even later (for a scheduled 7:30 curtain).  I didn’t leave at intermission, but I assume there was also some security-checking for returning viewers to be sure no one sneaked in for the second act with a weapon or a banner.

(I’ve made my feelings known on the subject of censorship and attempted censorship very clearly, whether the effort comes from a government agency, a powerful corporation or industry group, or a politically, socially, or religiously motivated organization.  My last statement on Rick On Theater on this kind of act, the demand that the Public Theater withdraw its Trump-invoking production of Shakespeare’s Julius Caesar from its summer Shakespeare in the Park season, was “Donald Julius Trump,” posted 27 June.)

The fact was, nothing came of the protest.  There was no sign of demonstrators before, during, or after the show.  (Of course, that doesn’t mean there couldn’t have been.)  There was apparently an Israel supporter from the Jewish Defense League on hand, ready to counter-protest if necessary, but since no one showed, she was gone by the time I saw the play—the night before it closed.

Not that Land is in any way pro-Israeli in a jingoistic sense; Grossman, the author of the source novel, has frequently criticized the Israeli government over its treatment of Palestinians and the spread of Israeli settlements in Palestinian territory.  “This play in itself is a protest,” pronounced the novelist.  “We protest against this situation of people in Israel living all the time under the threat of war after war after war, with no striving towards peace.”  Adapter and director Snir asserts that the story “depicts the situation of the Israeli milieu and touches upon the shared multilayered trauma experienced by everyone living in this country. Jews, Arabs, rightists, leftists, secular Jews, and those who wear a kippa—we all share a common fate.”  (A kippa or kippah is a skullcap or yarmulke worn by observant male Jews to show their devotion to God by keeping their heads covered.)  It’s about the emotional and psychological devastation of war—especially constant war—and isn’t disparaging of Arabs or Palestinians except an occasional remark that’s directed at an enemy who’s shooting at, principally, the soldier-son of the play’s central character.  (She utters a perfectly understandable curse at one point when she’s more than usually distraught.)  In addition, the Arab cab driver the lead character hires, levels his own expletives at the Jews in a moment of anger and frustration at the plight of Palestinians and Israeli Arabs. 

The plot of To the End of the Land is twisty—and time-bending—especially the way adapter and director Snir tells it.  (Grossman, who had no hand in the adapted script, apparently tells the story more realistically and, I gather, straightforwardly—though it, too, jumps around in time.)  It’s non-linear and leaves a lot of the (historical) facts out so that if you’re not up on Israeli history and, to a lesser extent, culture, you miss details that might be telling.  (Do you know, for instance, what an “Arabic” salad is?  It’s central to one scene, and Helen says it’s a “very fine-cut” salad.)  Snir acknowledges that he knows Israeli audiences but not those in New York.  He can rely on his homeland viewers to understand what the characters are going through, but there were initial doubts that the novel could be adapted for theatergoers from outside Israel.  (There have been inquiries from places like Poland, Germany, and England about translation and production rights.)  It doesn’t help that the supertitles are either on the far sides of the proscenium or at the top of the arch so that you can either read the dialogue (which zips by pretty fast in the titles, handled by Tami Rubin and Omer Strass) or watch the actors—but not both.  (At While I Was Waiting, the titles were halfway up the two-level platform that was the back part of the set—that is, right over the heads of the actors on the stage or below the feet of the ones on the upper level—perfectly placed to watch and read.)  

In part, the play’s an odd love story among Ora (Efrat Ben Zur), Avram (Dror Keren), and Ilan (Amnon Wolf) that takes place during three wars.   The three main characters meet in a hospital in 1967 at the age of 16, in the midst of the Six Day War.  (They’re not war casualties; they’re all suffering from a life-threatening fever.  They even compete over who has the highest temperature—making a game of their own potential death!)  This random meeting ties them together and shapes their fate, in light of the fragility and anxiety of Israeli existence.  (This aspect of the play is a little like Design for Living with war and psychological damage.)

The plot then zips through some years to Yom Kippur 1973 (the Yom Kippur War, when Golda Meir was caught napping and almost lost to the Egyptian army).  Avram, who’d be 22 by then, was in the army and was captured and tortured; we see the consequences of that in the rest of the play, which moves into 2006 and the Second Lebanon War, in which Ora’s son Ofer (Daniel Sabbag) is now a soldier.  This is the crux of the play.

Ora’d been planning a hiking trip in the Galilee (“the end of the land” of Israel) with her son to celebrate the end of his enlistment.  Then the day after he’s released from his military service, Ofer gets a call from his unit to tell him there’s an emergency brewing on the Lebanese border and he volunteers to go back.  Now, in real life—a fact revealed in program notes—Grossman’s youngest son, a tanker, was killed just hours before the cease-fire with Lebanon, while the writer was finishing the novel.  In the play, Ora decides to go off to Galilee anyway, believing that if she can’t be reached to receive the “notification” of Ofer’s death, he’ll be safe.  (Ironically, the Galilee is on the border with Lebanon, right where the military emergency to which Ofer’s rushing is underway.)  She hires a cab driver, a Palestinian named Sami (Guy Messika), and makes Avram, who’s Ofer’s father, go with her.  (Ora directs Sami, “Drive to where the land ends.”  The driver responds, “For me, it ended a long time ago.”)  Avram’s still damaged from the  experiences in 1973, which he relives in a gruesome flashback.  Over several days and nights, as they hike along the Israel National Trail, doing the only thing she can think of to protect her son, Ora recounts Ofer’s life story as if that will keep them both safe from the dreaded “notifiers.”  As if in a split-screen film scene, we see Ofer and his unitmates as they prepare for possible combat on the Lebanese border, singing and joking—as well as expressing fear for what they know may come. 

This is what the play’s really about—the woman fleeing the tidings, “evil tidings, that is; that awful knock at the door, the ‘tidings’ etched on the serried ranks of military gravestones that punctuate our wars,” in Helen Kaye’s words—though it takes half of act one to get to it (and it doesn’t get going until act two).  The obsessive actions Ora takes to “protect” her son are really (though the play doesn’t use this term) magical thinking. 

Though Grossman’s son was killed in that same war, it isn’t clear what Ofer’s fate is—though the sense I got is that he survives.  But that’s not really relevant—its the effect of constant warfare on Ora and her companions (Ilan is off on a hiking trip of his own with their son Adam—not a character in the play—in Peru).  At one point, Ora loses it when she hears that a bomber has killed people in Tel Aviv and that he’d passed through her son’s checkpoint without being detected.  She’s glad that he didn’t blow himself up at the checkpoint instead, but Ofer insists that it’s his mission to have the bomb go off at the checkpoint rather than in the city.  This notion makes Ora crazy. 

In my report on While I Was Waiting, I said that that play was about how Syrians living in Damascus in the midst of that civil war try to live normal lives in the face of the violence, destruction, and personal grief.  Coincidentally, To the End of the Land is also about the herculean, not to say sisyphean, struggle to keep the fragile bonds of family together in the face of what Snir calls “a reality of existential uncertainty”: the constant violence and terror which threaten to be “the end of the land” of Israel in a different sense.  At the same time, the play shows the beauty and warmth of Israeli reality for, as Grossman explains, much of the story takes place “in nature,” in the “stillness and beauty” of northernmost Israel.  In the play, Ora and Avram meet a group of cult-like ascetics who befriend and comfort them.

David Grossman, a native Jerusalemite born in 1954, is a former child actor on Israeli radio and an outspoken left-wing peace activist.  He believes that working with the Palestinians is the only route to peace.  He’s written nine internationally acclaimed novels, five works of nonfiction, and a short story collection, as well as more than a dozen children’s books, a children’s opera, several poems, and a play.  His books have been translated into more than 35 languages.  Of his approach to writing, he says: “I experience writing like the removal of layer after layer of a cataract which prevents me from seeing the story I’m writing clearly.”  

Grossman’s received numerous awards, including the Chevalier de l’Ordre des Arts et des Lettres (France), Prix Eliette von Karajan (Austria), Marsh Award for Children’s Literature in Translation (United Kingdom), Buxtehuder Bulle (Germany), Sapir Prize (Israel), Premio per la Pace e l’Azione Umanitaria 2006 (Italy), Onorificenza della Stella Solidarita Italiana 2007, Premio Ischia – International Award for Journalism 2007 (Italy), EMET Award 2007 (Israel), and the Albatros Prize (Günter Grass Foundation, Germany).  He also received the Peace Prize of the German Booksellers Association in Frankfurt in 2010, France’s Prix Medicis for translated literature in 2011, and the Brenner Prize (Israel) in 2012.  The 2010 English translation of To the End of the Land was nominated for the National Book Critics Circle Award; in 2013 he received the French Point Award for Land and the Italian Fundazione Calcari for Lifetime Achievement.  His latest novel, A Horse Walks into a Bar (2017), recently won the Man Booker International Prize for the year’s best fiction in translation (U.K.) and has been adapted for the stage at the Cameri Theatre, directed by Dror Keren (also one of the adapters), who appears as Avram in Land.

Hanan Snir, born in 1943 in Tel Aviv (then within British Mandatory Palestine), is a graduate of the department of theater arts at Tel Aviv University and the Royal Academy of Dramatic Arts in London.  He was a trainee director at the Royal Shakespeare Company under Peter Brook (1970) and directed at London’s Royal Academy of Dramatic Arts (1970–72).  In Israel, Snir was a resident director at the Beer Sheva Municipal Theater (1972–74) and associate director of the Cameri Theatre of Tel Aviv (1977–82); since 1984, he’s been associate director at the Ha’Bima National Theatre, where he was artistic director from 1992–93.  Snir’s received numerous awards for his productions, including the Israel Theater Life Achievement Award in 2015.  He received the Israeli Academy Prize for Best Production, Best Director, and Best Translator in 2007 for Sophocles’ Antigone, and won Best Play and Best Director in 2015 for Tadeusz Słobodzianek’s Our Class.  In May 2017 he won Best Director and Best Playwright for his stage adaptation of To the End of the Land at the Israel Theater Prizes.  The stage director is also a certified psychotherapist and holds a diploma in family therapy, psychodrama, and cognitive behavioral therapy, and a master’s degree in counseling psychology from Boston University.

Snir began working on his adaptation of Land in the summer of 2014 when he was in London for a gig. When he first read the novel, he was “unable to put the book down,” but was daunted by the challenge of adapting it for the stage.  It took him “about two years to digest” the book, he said.  While he was abroad, Israel launched a military operation against Hamas in the Gaza Strip and “the ground operation and the first casualties” drove the director into “a flurry of writing.”  He also identified very strongly with the central characters:

I liked the book very much, the three main characters are people who are my age, so I know what the period is like. I was in that world too, I knew the characters, the circumstances and felt I could really understand it and have empathy towards them. 

While Grossman didn’t collaborate on the writing of the script, he did approve of the finished version and attended the dress rehearsal and has since seen about half dozen performances.  (He attended the opening performance of the Lincoln Center Festival run.)  The novel covers 630 pages (575 pages in Jessica Cohen’s English rendering) and over 50 years of the lives of the three main characters.  Reducing it to a 2½-hour, two-act play, Snir decided to concentrate on “the triangle between Ora and the men in her life, Avram and Ilan,” leaving out the “numerous characters and subplots” and the early scenes of the three characters’ childhoods. 

Snir also saw that he couldn’t reproduce on the stage a realistic representation of all the locales in the novel, particularly the outdoor scenes, and turned to what he calls “story theater.”  In Snir’s application of the term, this technique has little to do with Viola Spolin’s improvised staging of fairytales and fables, made popular by the work of her son, Paul Sills, in the 1960s, but more closely resembles Bertolt Brecht’s “epic theater”: “It does not attempt to delude the audience into thinking that this is a realistic, ‘well constructed’ play . . . but emphasizes the fact that it is a theater performance and all its elements are exposed to the audience.”  

This includes occasional direct address to the audience from the edge of the stage and musical interludes composed by Ori Vidislavski (members of the cast play drums, guitar, harmonica, and accordion) that have a klezmer-ish sound.  The scenes of Land on stage don’t transition by cause-and-effect, the way a realistic, well-made play is structured.  The leaping about in time obviates this logic, so, in Snir’s words, “It is sometimes rapid, associative, or contrapuntal in order to heighten the dramatic tension.”

Snir’s “story theater” works pretty well for the most part, especially in the shorter and more conventionally-staged scenes.  But I found the longer outdoor sequences ultimately repetitive as Ora and Avram circle and circle the center of the set trying to convey obsessive movement along the trail.  The pace of the hikers varies some, but the circling still just goes round and round.  (The play’s movement is credited to Miri Lazar.)

The acting in Snir’s To the End of the Land is essentially realistic—high-pitched and psychologically heightened, but not stylized—but Roni Toren’s set (brightly lit by Roni Cohen) is nothing but a three-sided white box that’s almost doorless.  (There’s one large double door, like one to a hospital ward, on the stage right wall and several hidden entrances on all three walls.)  The props are mostly some chairs and a table that get moved about to be used for different things (like Sami’s cab), a couple of hospital beds (for the first scenes), and some doors that actors carry on and off now and then.  These aren’t used as entrances or exits; they’re just symbolic objects which I decided were visualizations of the door Ora doesn’t want someone to knock on to bring her the news of Ofer’s death.  (I don’t know if that’s right, but that’s what I figured.)  The simple but straightforward costumes, from military combat uniforms for Ofer and his comrades-in-arms to religious robes for the ascetics, are by Polina Adamov.

To stand in for the natural beauty of northern Israel, which isn’t depicted literally on stage, though the novelist’s “picturesque descriptions of nature and the landscape are rich and wonderful in their beauty,” according to Snir, the director has the actors place some large rocks around the center of the stage and the actors who play the solders and cult members turn to the white wall and draw child-like pencil representations of the Galilean hills. 

While Ben Zur’s Ora is clearly the focal character of the stage version of To the End of the Land, the play functions essentially as a four-character ensemble with eight extras, most of whom do double duty as musicians.  Ben Zur’s a very strong presence on stage, which isn’t to say the character’s always in charge of either her own situation or the goings-on around her—but she’s never anything less than totally committed, both the character and the actress.  In her trek through the Galilee, she leads Avram in what begins to seem like a frantic effort to lose herself—literally.  Wolf’s Ilan, who has less stage time than the other two members of the triangle (since the character’s abroad, Ilan only appears in the flashback scenes), is the closest thing to a grown-up in the central foursome.  Ilan accepts Ora’s affair with Avram and, when Avram refuses to be part of Ofer’s life, Ilan steps up; but Wolf exudes an air of troubled resignation.  Keren is mercurial as Avram, ranging from a very young 16-year-old in the hospital to a nearly out-of-control damaged warrior on the Israel National Trail. 

All three of these middle-aged actors give portrayals of a trio of oddly naïve teens in the play’s first scenes, behaving almost like 10-year-olds rather than 16, but that’s largely due—perhaps intentionally—to Snir’s script and directing than just Ben Zur’s, Wolf’s, and Keren’s acting.  In contrast, Daniel Sabbag is all adolescent bluster and ego as the young soldier who revels with his buddies in the camaraderie of army life and the adrenaline high of potential combat.  (One wonders if Avram had felt this way in 1973 before he faced Anwar Al Sadat’s Egyptian army.)  When Ofer’s on the phone with his unit, you can see his excitement to rejoin them even as his mother is packing for the hiking trip.  It’s clearly more than patriotism that’s driving Sabbag’s Ofer—it’s the chance to howl with his fellows in a world without his mother.  (I confess, in my own military service, I never quite felt that impulse—but I had peers who did.  I recognize it, but didn’t experience it first-hand.)  This is clearly acted out in the scenes of impromptu singing and dancing in which Ofer and his band of brothers (and sisters) engage.

Land works better, at least for those of us who don’t speak Hebrew and don’t know the novel, on an emotional level than on a narrative one.  (A lot of the audience around me was speaking Hebrew so I gather that many Israelis were in attendance.)  The emotions and psychological states of the main characters are not only the real point of Snir’s adaptation—a hallmark of both Grossman’s writing and Snir‘s directing is reported to be an unstinting portrayal of emotional anguish—but they’re the core of the performance as well.  This isn’t surprising when we hear Snir confess that after rereading the novel as 2014’s Operation Protective Edge unfolded in Gaza, “I felt very emotional about it.”   We need the outline of the story to generate the emotions and so that they make some sense, but it’s the feelings that matter here, not the story.  That’s especially true of Ora, but also of Avram and Ilan—and even, to lesser extent, of Ofer—who’s really a catalyst.  He’s also the connector among Ora, Avram, and Ilan, the living embodiment of their childhood connection: he’s Ora’s and Avram’s son, and Ilan (who was married to Ora) looks on him as his son as well.  

As with While I Was Waiting, the press coverage of To the End of the Land was slight.  (In this case, part of the issue might have been the protest and call for boycott.  I don’t know how many critical outlets might have been deterred by the political controversy, which got more press attention than the performance.  I found it odd, though, that the New York Daily News and websites Broadway World and Stage Buddy carried related stories—the News and Broadway World both reported on the protest and Stage Buddy interviewed Snir—but didn’t carry reviews.)  Once again, there’s also no Show-Score tally for Land.  I’ll be reporting on four New York notices (there are some reviews on line for the Tel Aviv performances), and I’ll recap Helen Kaye’s Jerusalem Post notice from 2016.

The Forward (formerly the Jewish Daily Forward) ran two articles on To the End of the Land, both essentially reviews (while covering other aspects of the event as well).  In one, Talya Zax, the Forward’s culture fellow, saw the play as “a microcosm of Israel as it is: Devoid of—and even ambivalent towards—a once-desired peace, struggling for internal cohesion, and demanding extraordinary physical, emotional, and ethical sacrifices from its citizens, Jewish and Arab alike.”  Quoting Snir, Zax reported the director-adapter felt, “Israel is living on many, many layers of trauma,” and added: “Those layers appeared onstage in surprising ways.”  She noted that there are scenes of “rare theatrical choice that [evoke] real wonder” that are also “heartbreaking” and others that “became alarmingly hectic.” 

In the other Forward piece, Jane Eisner, the paper’s editor-in-chief, acknowledged, “I approached seeing the theatrical adaptation of David Grossman’s brilliant, disturbing novel ‘To the End of the Land’ last night with some trepidation” due to the “long list of notable but misguided literary types” who’d called for its withdrawal.  The protest being unsuccessful, Eisner “was forced to confront the deep, haunting, indeed primal fear of a Jewish mother facing the loss of a beloved child” which “somehow . . . seemed more piercing in the play, dominant and unrelenting,” than in the novel.  Eisner, a self-professed “Jewish mother” herself, found this “all the more remarkable because the play was written and directed by men.”  Ben Zur’s Ora “holds the stage like she holds your heart, in a tight almost suffocating grasp that gets at every raw emotion a mother feels and expresses.  She is at once loving, confounding, infuriating, pitiable, caring and self-absorbed, but she is not irrational.”  Noting that the original Hebrew title focuses the story on Ora, the Forward editor proclaimed that “seeing the play last night affirmed my sense that the story is Ora’s story.”  In answer to the protesters, Eisner insisted that novelist Grossman “is . . . a fierce anti-war activist in the Israeli political context” and “his characters speak to a human condition that extends beyond the specific conflict in the Middle East to all mothers whose children face existential danger.”  She added: “Or should I say, all parents,” noting the writer’s own loss.  “Even if he had tried to flee,” concluded Eisner, “he could not have escaped the b’sorah [‘notification,’ ‘tidings’].  Neither, in the end, can any of us.”

Alexis Soloski noted in the New York Times that Grossman’s novel “is a work of realism, but it has a hallucinatory quality marked by intensity of feeling and complicated shifts in time” and pointed out that “Snir’s adaptation feels feverish, too.”  The stage adaptation of To the End of the Land “has a sanitary, all-white setting, but no ice-bath descriptive prose to cool down the story.”  Soloski reported, “The first act is particularly frantic, yet its most striking moments are its quietest.”  Complaining, as I did, that “the positioning of the supertitles means that non-Hebrew speakers must ignore either the acting or the translation,” the Times reviewer warned, “The story will remain somewhat opaque to those who haven’t read the book or at least a summary.”  In the other hand, “More legible were the emotional complexities of the characters.”  Soloski caviled, “The play moves swiftly, if not always deftly” as the writer and the director-adapter “nest Ora’s struggles in their fraught and pessimistic context, made even a little more fraught, perhaps, by the controversy surrounding the production.” 

Dubbing To the End of the Land part of “a mini-trend” of “[f]amilies at war . . . at this Lincoln Center Festival” on the Huffington Post, David Finkle described the relationship among the three central characters as “a romance that’s also a bromance.”  (Whereas I invoked Noël Coward’s Design for Living as a template, Finkle compared this part of Land to “a spin on Henri-Pierre Roché’s Jules et Jim, which Francois Truffaut stunningly translated to the screen.”)  The HP reviewer observed that Snir “is intent on his work being absorbed as storytelling rather than as a play” and found that the “story theater” “notion works most of the time,”  especially “when Ben Zur, Keren and Wolf are lending every ounce of their intense talents to Ora, Avram and Ilan.”  Finkle added: “The anguish they expend in the two-act piece is extraordinary.”  “[Ev]ery once in a while,” the review-writer lamented, “Snir’s storytelling, as opposed to Grossman’s, becomes repetitive,” citing the same circular trekking that I did earlier. Complaining also about the “the musical interludes,” which he said sometimes “become a mite overenthusiastic,” Finkle admonished, “Story Theater should always be once-upon-a-time smooth, never twee.”  Nonetheless, in the end, he concluded that

when the last sprint has been concluded, the way in which war exacerbates the already complex quality of love and the teasing, taunting and trashing of family life is movingly, possibly even memorably rendered.

On New York Theater, Jonathan Mandell reported of To the End of the Land, in which “the lives of the three main characters . . . are less defined by love than by war,” that adapter Snir “chops this story into pieces, and presents the pieces in an order that makes it more dramatic, and at times less than clear.”  Mandell added that Snir “also spices [the production] with an anti-naturalistic theatricality . . . using minimal props, [the actors’] own bodies, and occasional musical instruments.”  Though the addresses to the audience seem “attempts to help the audience . . ., the play often feels geared to people who’ve read the novel,” the New York Theater reviewer found.  In the end, however, Mandell judged that “there are enough moments in ‘To The End of the Land’ that hit hard enough to compensate for the confusion.”

As I noted at the top of this report, I was prompted to see To the End of the Land by the review from the Jerusalem Post written by my friend Helen Kaye.  Though I posted the 14 March 2016 notice on ROT last September, I feel it’s appropriate to capsulize it here as well.  Given that Helen’s an Israeli and writes for an Israeli reader, she saw the play a little differently than I could.  To the Edge of the Land (as I pointed out she called the play in English) “explains us to ourselves but it’s also the portrait of us that the world doesn’t see,” she asserted.  She continued:

For a few years now we’ve been uneasy about ourselves, about where we’re going, about what we’re doing to ourselves (and to others), as a people, as a nation.  As a people, as a nation, we’ve tried to reconcile lives that are lived on the edge of an abyss; to live normally in the fractious spaces between the endless wars.

Our theater reflects this existential dis-ease.

“Ben Zur, Wolf and Keren drive the play,” Helen affirmed.  “Watching them, I had to remember to breathe.  Had to stop myself from racing up there to comfort them, to encourage them, to hear and listen.”  Snir (of whom Helen declared in an e-mail quite simply: “Hanan Snir is a genius”) “always coaxes from his actors more than they realize is in them.”  Ora and Avram’s trek through the Galilee, emphasized Helen, “is the story of the ties that bind, that heal, that destroy, the ties of love, of pain, of joys and fears among and for us and the bruised, beautiful, laden land in which we live.”  

I think it’s obvious why I’d be impelled to see Land when I found out it was coming here.  Helen’s review betrays how moved she clearly was.  I’d never be able to see the play the way she did, of course—just as I couldn’t experience it the way Jane Eisner, a self-proclaimed Jewish mother, experienced it.  (Even though Eisner made a sop to fathers, I’m not a parent at all.)  But I could conceivably see what communicated those feelings, the performances, the staging, the writing, the theatricality.  Even though the veil of the translation, I could glimpse these aspects of theater that said those things to Helen (and Eisner).  How could I not give it try? 

[A personal note: I went through a vaguely similar situation to Ora’s with my own mother 48 years ago.  She never went walk-about to become a “notification refusenik,” as Ora calls herself in To the End of the Land, but she made “bargains”—some overt, some silent, and some expressed as jokes—to keep me alive.

[I went into the army in December 1969, as some ROTters will know by now, while the war in Vietnam was still raging.  (The Mylai massacre was revealed less than a month before I reported for active duty.)  I wouldn’t be available for overseas duty for several months at least, but my minimum contractual commitment was for two years and there was no indication at the time that the war would end by then.  Indeed, it was a common expression in those years to refer to an impossible outcome for any endeavor as “like asking for peace in Vietnam,” where the military conflict had been going on since 1949.  It had been 15 years since the United States took over the support of South Vietnam and five since U.S. troops were committed to combat after the passage of the Gulf of Tonkin Resolution. 

[Things worked out fortuitously for me, as it turned out.  I was in one kind of training program or another until 1971 before I was assigned to West Berlin for what was on paper a three-year tour.  The policy when I got to my new post, however, was for officers to serve 18 months in Europe and then be sent home for leave before transfer to Southeast Asia.  I fully expected that to happen to me as it had for my first boss in Berlin within a few months of my arrival.  But on 27 January 1973, almost exactly a year-and-a-half after I took up my duties in West Berlin, the parties to the war in Southeast Asia signed a cease-fire at Versailles.  I ended up doing the rest of my military service fighting the cold war in Europe rather than the hot one in Asia.  I served almost five years in the army, but I never saw combat.  Much to my mother’s relief—though she suffered more than few frights in my behalf nonetheless.  It was easy for me  to see myself in Ofer’s place and my mom in Ora’s.]

01 August 2017

'While I Was Waiting' (2017 Lincoln Center Festival)


The theme of this summer’s Lincoln Center Festival, which ran from 10 to 30 July 2017, was  “transcending borders,” according to Nigel Redden, the festival director.  I chose two of the festival offerings that reflect that idea strongly: While I Was Waiting, the first Syrian play in the LCF in its 22-season history, and To the End of the Land, an Israeli drama.  I’ve often said that one of the absolute best things about living in New York City is that the arts of the entre works eventually make it here.  While many world capitals get touring shows and exhibits from abroad, no city that I can think of gets them in the quantity and frequency from as many foreign theaters, concert halls, and studios.  It’s almost an even bet that if it tours, it’ll get here sooner or later.  On the theater scene, with the Brooklyn Academy of Music’s Next Wave Festival and the summer glut that’s the LCF, we get several score of plays from dozens of countries, represented by both large institutional theaters and small companies presenting both new works and classics.  (There’s nothing quite like seeing a national classic performed by actors from that country, like a Chekhov from a Russian company or a Molière by a French troupe.)  Add to these the individual tours of productions from overseas, and a year will bring close to a hundred theater performances of every description and conceivable form of stage art from which to choose.  And that’s not even counting the musical, dance, and performance presentations from around the globe. 

That said, I was very curious about While I Was Waiting because I haven’t seen very much Arabic theater.  (One past experience was Speaker’s Progress by Sulayman Al-Bassam, a Kuwaiti playwright  and director, in a 2011 BAM Next Wave Festival.  See my report, posted on 27 October 2011.)  In addition, I was curious how a play from one of the banned countries would fare here now that President Trump’s Muslim travel ban has taken limited effect.  (I imagine most of the visas for While I Was Waiting were secured before the Supreme Court’s partial lifting in June of the injunction barring the ban’s enforcement.  Nonetheless, according to an article by theater reporter David Cote published by Lincoln Center, the process to secure visas for members of the Waiting company was labyrinthine and often fraught.)  Aside from its content, While I Was Waiting is interesting from another perspective as well.  Both the writer, Mohammad Al Attar, and the director, Omar Abusaada, have formal training from the Higher Institute of Dramatic Arts in Damascus.  I know there are Arabic plays all over the Islamic world—Naguib Mahfouz (1911-2006), the 1988 Nobel laureate in literature, was an Egyptian playwright, as well as a novelist, poet, and screenwriter—but the only ones I’ve ever heard of or seen have been modern plays.  (My friend Helen Kaye, who covers culture for the Jerusalem Post—and has contributed often to Rick On Theater—has written about some Arabic plays in Israel.)  I didn’t know whether the Arab world has a historical theater tradition.  Africa doesn’t; neither do Native Americans.  Both those cultures are still trying to adapt Western theater practices for their indigenous narrative forms and other performance traditions (music, dance, and masking, among others).  I wondered if Arab cultures are in the same position.

It turns out, they are.  What we see as “theater,” meaning stage plays performed by actors, in the Middle East is a Western import that dates no farther back than the late 19th or early 20th century in most countries of the Arabian Peninsula and North Africa.  Censorship and religious and cultural taboos (such as women appearing on stage and religious and historical icons impersonated by actors) had been one impediment to the development of an indigenous theater; most early regional theater exposure came from traveling European troupes.  Indigenous companies began imitating and adapting the stage fare introduced by the Western companies.  Local playwrights began writing their own versions of Shakespeare and Molière, incorporating their own nations’ forms of performance such as storytelling and shadow puppetry.  My minimal experience with Arab plays suggests to me that theater artists in this region are still experimenting with what is fundamentally a foreign art form, still looking for ways to make it their own.  This may account for some of what I discerned in While I Was Waiting.  (When I visited a museum in Istanbul dedicated to Turkish modern art, I learned that the Ottoman Empire used to send nascent indigenous artists to Paris for art training and they usually came back imitating Western European techniques and styles to depict Turkish subjects and themes.  It has taken generations for Turkish modern artists to begin to find a truly Turkish form of painting and sculpture—and, to my eye, they still haven’t gotten very good at it.  This may find its parallel in theater in the Arab world.)

A co-production of Festival d’Avignon, Napoli Teatro Festival, AFAC Arab Fund for Arts and Culture, Pôle Arts de la scène – Friche La Belle de Mai (Marseille), Theater Spektakel (Zurich), Onassis Cultural Centre (Athens), Vooruit (Ghent), La Bâtie Festival de Genève, Les Bancs publics – Festival Les Rencontres à l’échelle (Marseille), and Festival d’Automne à Paris, While I Was Waiting was written by Mohammad Al Attar starting in 2015.  Based on the story of a friend of director Omar Abusaada, with whom Al Attar first collaborated in 2007, it was premièred at the Kunsten Festival in Brussels in May 2016.  It won the ZKB (Züricher Kantonalbank) Patronage Prize at the 2016 Züricher Theater Spektakel and was selected for the 70th Festival d’Avignon in France in July 2016.  Before its run in New York City, While I Was Waiting was presented in Athens and the French cities of Marseille and Lille.  The North American première of the play opened on 19 July 2017 at the Gerald W. Lynch Theater at John Jay College of Criminal Justice, a component of the City University of New York, on West 59th Street; it ran through the 22nd and I saw the 8 p.m. performance on Friday, 21 July. 

Over its 22 seasons, the Lincoln Center Festival has presented 1,465 performances of opera, music, dance, theater, and interdisciplinary forms by internationally acclaimed artists from more than 50 countries.  In that time, the festival has commissioned 44 new works and offered 145 world, North American, U.S., and New York premieres.  It places particular emphasis on showcasing contemporary artistic viewpoints and multidisciplinary works that challenge the boundaries of traditional performance.  This summer’s festival, celebrating 50 years since Lincoln Center for the Performing Arts launched the first prototype for the annual international festival, includes 20 international productions and 43 performances from 17 nations.

Since its opening in 1988, the Gerald W. Lynch Theater has been a cultural resource for John Jay College and New York City.  The theater’s dedicated to the creation and presentation of performing arts programming of all disciplines with a special focus on how art can illuminate the perception of justice in U.S. society.  The Lynch Theater’s also a member of CUNY Stages, a consortium of 16 performing arts centers located on City University campuses across New York City.  The theater’s hosted events in the Lincoln Center Festival since the LCF’s first season in 1996, as well as presenting performances by the New York City Opera, Great Performers at Lincoln Center, Gotham Chamber Opera, Metropolitan Opera Guild, and Alvin Ailey American Dance Theater/Ailey II.  The theater’s also been the site of many television and film specials including A&E’s Live by Request, Comedy Central Presents and Premium Blend; Robert Klein in Concert; and VH1’s Soundtrack Live.

Driving out of Damascus one day in 2015, in search of locations for a documentary film,  and after passing through one of the many checkpoints that dot the city, Taim (Mohammad Alrefai), a tyro filmmaker in his late 20’s, was pulled over on the road and beaten unconscious.  He reappeared later at a hospital and now lies in a deep coma, which the playwright calls a “grey zone,” somewhere between life and death.  No one knows who the assailants were or why Taim was attacked.  Was it political?  Common thuggery?  Drug related?  In the Damascus of 2015, it could be any of these.  The incident forces his family to confront painful realities and buried revelations.  After surviving the murder of Taim’s father, and the scandal it revealed, his mother, who gravitated to conservative Islam and took to wearing traditional garb, and sister, who’d fled to Beirut years before to escape her mother’s religiosity, seem incapable of facing his coma, “neither alive nor dead, this grey zone somewhere between hope and despair.”  From his liminal state, the young man observes from a platform overlooking the stage or wanders unseen among his family and friends, as his mother, Amal (Hanan Chkir), and older sister, Nada (Nanda Mohammad), who’s returned to Damascus for her brother, and, in Al Attar’s words, “watches his family members and friends struggle with the idea of losing him as well as a reality that is becoming fiercer every day.”

Together the characters tell us about the upheaval in their everyday lives, and about the changes that have struck the Syrian capital, now become strange and cruel.  Taim’s joined in his otherworldly commentary by his friend Omar (Mustafa Kur), tortured to death—or perhaps only nearly—in 2014 in one of Bashar Al Assad’s prisons.  (The waking characters don’t see or hear these two—only we do.)  As Taim’s family comes and goes from his hospital bedside—which remains empty to the audience (though the other characters still see Taim lying there) once Alrefai rises at the top of the one-hour-and-forty-five-minute play—performed without intermission in Arabic with English supertitles (translation by Lana Abdo and supertitles operated by Tarek Hefny)—Taim’s also visited by his girlfriend, Salma (Reham Kassar) and an older friend, Osama (Mohammad Alrashi), a kind of aging hippie (and would-be songwriter who’s never finished a song) who seems to have been Taim’s hashish connection.  The play depicts how Taim’s family and friends go on living while he hangs in his halfway state.  As the play ends, the family circle is still in turmoil, and Taim, still in the grey zone, is being brought home.  And the country’s still in the throes of a seemingly endless civil war.  Taim’s family must continue to wait for some resolution to his in-between state—just as all Syrians must wait for some resolution of the state of the country.

What happens in the play is that on one level, there’s a basically realistic plot of the family and friends coping with Taim’s coma and managing their daily existences, with all the problems of a dysfunctional family anywhere in the world, while the city and its infrastructure deteriorate around them from the civil war.  “You tend to think about those people that you see through reports in the media as characters, not as human beings,” Al Attar says, adding that “by trying to focus on one family you see that Syrians are much closer to you than you think.”  In fact, the play’s not unlike a soap opera, with the bickering, teasing, fighting, and scolding, except the performances are more convincing.  

On another level, the comatose Taim and Omar comment on what’s happening and make observations.  “How can nothing have changed after all that happened?” asks Omar, referring to the fact that hundreds of thousands of Syrians have died in the six years of civil war, yet the dictatorial regime is still in place.  Abusaada declares, “I think [Taim] can see, listen and feel what is happening—but he can’t react to what’s happening around [him]”; he and Omar can’t affect anything going on in the waking world, just as many Syrians can see what’s happening in the country, but can’t do anything about it.  Playwright Al Attar explains:

While I Was Waiting is an attempt to tell the story of a people who are still trying to survive—the story behind the images on screens and in newspapers and beyond the complex political analysis, all of which often ignore the fate of ordinary humans and the deep transformations happening in their lives, thoughts, and beliefs.  This story of a middle-class family is similar to many families in Damascus and Syria in general.  Its members are trying to survive during a time of violence, war, and social change. In this quest, they greatly transform as individuals; some decide to engage in long-deferred confrontations while others are content to observe.

The play, like Samuel Beckett’s Waiting for Godot (whose French title means “While Waiting for Godot”), takes place while the characters await some kind of resolution and the action is what they do while waiting.

The realistic plot works perfectly well.  Bissane Al Charif’s set’s fragmentary, but everything else in this aspect of While I Was Waiting is pretty much Realism.  The stark lighting was designed by Abdulhameed Khaleifa—though because of President Trump’s now-effective travel ban against Syrians, he was denied a visa and the design was executed at the Lynch by “Lighting Interpreter” Zakaria Al-Alami.  This aspect of the play can be very wrenching emotionally with the Assad dictatorship and the civil war as a backdrop.  The cast to an actor was clearly so committed to this play and its context that it would be easy to imagine I wasn’t watching skilled actors creating characters, but the characters themselves participating in a psychodrama. 

The ethereal level doesn’t work as well for me—it’s not fully realized, I think (in terms of presentational style, for instance) and there are multi-media elements (Taim’s videos, created by Reem Al Ghazzi, and music and sound by wannabe-DJ Omar, designed by Samer Saem Eldahr, also known as electronic music artist Hello Psychaleppo—who also contributed the original music, a sort of Middle Eastern rock sound, for the show) that aren’t thoroughly developed or integrated.  From the physical and vocal portrayals—since I couldn’t understand the Arabic dialogue—there were times I felt that both Alrefai and Kur were uncomfortable with these scenes, and when Taim’s consciousness was walking among his waking family and friends, he seemed like he thought he was somewhere he shouldn’t be and was afraid he’d be “discovered.”

Then there’s yet another dimension to the play.  Taim is also  “a thinly veiled metaphor” for Syria, which the playwright also sees as existing in a “grey zone.”  For Abusaada, the “state between life and death represented the limbo that is war.”  Al Attar sees a parallel between the situations of the comatose Taim, who, with his friend Omar, had been enthusiastic participants in the 2011 uprising, born of the hopeful Arab Spring, against the Al Assad dictatorship, and that of Syria as a nation; he explains that

the situation in Syria was becoming increasingly complex and was worsening.  The regime’s excessive violence against protesters transformed the peaceful revolution against the most brutal dictatorship in the region into a fierce war, which soon turned into a proxy war waged at an international and regional level without involving the Syrians.  In this horrible picture there are still Syrians in the country or in the diaspora who are trying to resist death and displacement.  Their resistance, in its most instinctive form, lies in their insistence on surviving and in their refusal to give up the dream of positive change; they refuse to choose between Assad’s military fascism that has ruled the country for half a century and the religious fascism represented by ISIS and the like.

Both Taim and Omar, who’d even gone so far as to join the jihadist Al Nusra Front, became disaffected when they began to see that the tactics of the resistance were as vile as those of the regime.

This parallel isn’t explicit in the script—Al Attar explains it in a program note and the concept appears in most of the press and program coverage for the production—and it’s supposed to be subliminal.  Al Attar explains that

in our continuous attempts to understand the changes in Syria through theater, the story of the coma seemed to be the most appropriate framework for comprehending our absurd conditions.  Throughout the coma, reality’s cruelty and roughness can merge with our dreams and imaginings, which are our only escape from the harsh reality.  The coma also seemed to be an entry point from which to think about the tens of thousands of Syrians who forcibly disappeared or were imprisoned or whose bodies lay somewhere without graves.

I’m not sure this works, either, since I doubt viewers would get it without the note.  (I try to imagine Syrians seeing this play and I wonder if they’d get this concept when we Westerners wouldn’t without help.  I have a feeling they’d need to be told, too.)  But even though it doesn’t really work on its own, I find the idea praiseworthy because it raises the play’s impact a notch or two.  It’s clear that Taim’s circle stands in for ordinary Syrians, those who try to lead regular lives and are unaffiliated with Assad, ISIS and the jihadists, or even the Free Syrian Army, and that’s pretty compelling; but making the play speak for the country as a whole would be powerful.  The metaphor is worth working on to see if there are ways to make it clearer without actually spelling it out in the text.  I don’t know if it would ever be possible, but I like the attempt.

The idea for what became While I Was Waiting came to director Abusaada two years ago when he heard about a close friend who went through an ordeal identical to Taim’s and died after spending two months in a coma.  He visited the friend and met other people who had gone through similar experiences and then took his material to Al Attar who penned the play that he says is “a way of thinking of all those who are not with us and whose fates are unknown, of their mothers, of all who are in doubt, which is one of the biggest tragedies facing the Syrian people today.”  On several visits to Syrian hospitals, Abusaada met doctors as well as families facing the tragedy of a loved one’s coma.  He recorded their stories in order to understand the mysteries of this strange state and the ways in which the families and friends handled the pain of this “omnipresence of absence.”  From these strains, Abusaada and Al Attar conjured this tale that weaves together different levels of consciousness and the symbolic image of their homeland.

They also see the play as a reflection of their dreams for a Syrian political theater “whose values failed to become real when it was still possible.”  Theater, Abusaada asserts, “could be a tool of resistance.”  Says Al Attar: “For Syrians such as Omar Abusaada and myself, theater is our way to cling to hope and to resist despair.  This has given us a renewed impetus to reflect on the meaning of theater today.”  The playwright continues: “The more our reality deteriorates and the scenes in Syria become increasingly violent and bloody, the more we need to know about the conditions of ordinary people hiding behind the images transmitted to our television screens.” 

Mohammad Al Attar, 36, a dramaturg as well as a playwright, was born in Damascus.  He graduated with a degree in English literature from Damascus University in 2002 and a degree in Theatrical Studies from the Higher Institute of Dramatic Arts in Damascus in 2007.  He also received a master’s degree in Applied Drama (with special focus on the political and social role of theater) from Goldsmiths’ College, University of London, in 2010.  His theatrical works—which include Withdrawal, Samah, an improvisational work with a group of boys in a reform school; Online; Look at the Streets . . . This Is What Hope Looks Like; Could You Please Look into the Camera?; A Chance Encounter; Intimacy; and Antigone of Shatila, a contemporary adaptation of Sophocles’ play reset in the Lebanese refugee camp—have been performed in Damascus, London, New York, Seoul, Berlin, Brussels, Edinburgh, Tunis, Athens, Marseilles, and Beirut.  He’s written for numerous magazines and newspapers, with a special focus on the Syrian uprising.  Along with his writings for the stage, he uses theater in special projects with marginalized groups across the Arab world, including children from a depressed area on the outskirts of the old city of Tunis and women in the refugee camps outside Beirut.

Omar Abusaada, a 40-year-old director and playwright also from Damascus, started working as a dramaturg after finishing his theatrical studies at the Higher Institute of Dramatic Arts in Damascus.  He then moved into directing and cofounded the Studio Theater in Damascus and in 2004 directed his first theatrical work, Insomnia.  He directed the première of While I Was Waiting at the Kunsten Festival and at the 70th edition of Festival d’Avignon and had previously collaborated with Al Attar on Samah, Look at the Streets . . . This Is What Hope Looks Like, Antigone of Shatila, Could You Please Look into the Camera?, and Intimacy.  He’s also directed Al Affich; Almirwad Wa Almikhala; and Syrian Trojan Women.  He’s introduced into Syria different ideas of contemporary writing and documentary, and the practices of Augusto Boal’s Theater of the Oppressed, and has worked for years in remote villages and local communities in Syria, Egypt, and Yemen.  Abusaada also leads workshops in contemporary theater writing and directing.

There is another character in While I Was Waiting: the ancient city of Damascus.  Both playwright Al Attar and director Abusaada were born and grew up there, as did most of the cast.  But while Abusaada splits his time between his native city and Berlin, Al Attar left Damascus “against my will” in 2012 and eventually settled in the German capital, where he now lives and works.  Many of the cast and production staff of While I Was Waiting are expatriate Damascenes and, of course, the play can’t be performed in Syria because of its implied and stated political and social commentary; Al Attar vows he “cannot return as long as the Assad regime is in power,” even though all the rest of his family remains in Damascus.  “[T]he city still lives within me wherever I go,” affirms the playwright.   Even Abusaada, though he insists on remaining a resident of Damascus, can no longer work in Syria “since my work has this political interest.  I cannot really work in a free way.  Even everyday life is really hard, in terms of electricity, heating, transportation.”

For Al Attar and Abusaada, the city itself is significant to the play.  The playwright insists that While I Was Waiting 

is also the story of the city of Damascus, whose center has remained under horrific security control by the regime while overwhelming bombardment and siege take place on its outskirts.  The city has witnessed countless wars, invasions, and fires throughout its history and is currently witnessing new seasons of violent change.  It’s the city in which I was born and grew up, without ever feeling that I understood it well.

“The images of Damascus have been present in my long discussions with Omar and in our tireless attempts to understand its transformations and the future that awaits it,” Al Attar declares.  Much is made of Nada’s choice to leave the city for a life in Beirut, and in the last scenes of the play, while Nada seems to have decided to resettle in Damascus and live in her brother’s apartment while she tries to get his film produced, Taim’s girlfriend considers leaving their home city for Turkey.  Taim’s film was going to be a history of the city told through his family, for which purpose he’d been collecting old family photos and letters.  Scenes from his documentary, projected on the scrim that makes up a wall in the upper level of his and Omar’s platform, are all shots of Damascus in turmoil. 

In sum, While I Was Waiting is a fascinating play.  As I indicated, I  feel that it didn’t entirely work, but the idea’s interesting.  I surveyed four reviews of the Lincoln Center presentation.  (Critical coverage of Lincoln Center Festival performances is somewhat haphazard and curtailed because of their often limited readership appeal and the briefness of their runs.  Show-Score didn’t cover While I Was Waiting or the other Lincoln Center Festival show I attended, so there are no ratings calculations to report.)

In the U.S. edition of the Financial Times, Max McGuinness, calling While I Was Waiting a “subtle and devastating new work,” observed that the “juxtaposition of everyday human frailty and world-historical catastrophe sits at the heart of While I Was Waiting.”  Reports McGuinness: “Sectarian conflict may be raging all around, but the focus of Attar’s superbly acted six-hander is on how one ordinary, middle-class family and their friends struggle to keep going amid the chaos.”  Noting that “war here entails long stretches of tedium punctuated by blistering moments of violence,” the FT reviewer deemed, “It is a testament to Attar and director Omar Abusaada’s sense of theatrical restraint that the latter are never depicted on stage, save for the sound of distant gunshots caught on video.”  The play’s focus, McGuinness wrote, is Taim’s empty hospital bed, “a fitting metonym for the invisibility of the conflict’s victims.”  The review-writer’s final assessment was that “the play itself, which is rich in gallows humour and devoid of sentimentality, refuses to offer any tidy political or indeed dramatic resolution.  The war and life just go on.”

The New York Times’ Jesse Green dubbed While I Was Waiting “a subtly harrowing play,” reporting that it “gets around the [‘hectoring and grandiosity’ of political plays] by embracing failure as its central subject: the failure of government, yes, but also of resistance.”  Syria’s “sense of stasis despite enormous disruption”—the continuing civil violence that doesn’t seem to change anything—“is what gives Mr. Al Attar’s play its convincing bite,” found Green.  The tension between the ordinariness of the waking characters and the grim situation of Taim, “along with some astonishing visual images that arise from it, keeps ‘While I Was Waiting’ on a narrow course between horror and banality.”  After praising a “wonderful” moment in which Omar blows soap bubbles down on Salma, Green caviled that he “was not always convinced that such moments of beauty did justice to the horror of the situation,” but conceded that “that may be the point.”  The Timesman asserted that the play asks “whether we have a moral obligation to live in danger if we can escape it, or whether our obligation is rather the opposite.”  He offered, however, “Living in the gray zone does not seem to be an answer.”  In his concluding judgment, Green averred, “Taim seems to have succumbed to an ideology of hopelessness that Mr. Al Attar and the company of his play have survived,” referring to the sometimes perilous decisions of company members about where they live and what they do.  “In doing so, they have given new life to the idea of political theater by showing us how it may look a lot like domestic drama, as seen from above.”

“When one’s entire life is spent waiting, how does one measure the time?” asked Alia Malek in the New Yorker.  This is what While I Was Waiting depicts as Al Attar, Abusaada, and the actors “bring this reality to a New York stage, capturing dynamics rarely explored by non-Syrians.”  Malek, who’s a Syrian and a Damascene herself, acknowledged that the play “forces us to remember the country’s Taims and Omars . . . but it is also an indictment of the living.”  She added that “people living under authoritarian regimes are the victims of those who rule them; they also, however, become bystanders to brutality.  In Syria, we are complicit even if not directly to blame.”  Like the characters in the play, Malek felt the draw of the city for its natives: “home is home.”  Like Nada and Salma, “nearly six million Syrians have fled the country”; even, we learn at the end, Taim had planned to flee his homeland and native city.

On the Huffington Post, David Finkle asserted that While I Was Waiting “demands immediate attention” because it’s rare for New York City to play “host to a Syrian playwright and a Syrian director commenting on conditions in their war-afflicted country,” especially when that country is so much in the headlines in the United States.  Finkle pronounced While I Was Waiting  “a sturdy play that gets at the macrocosmic breadth of a horrifying situation . . . by going extremely microcosmic and thereby earning the attention accorded it.”  The HP reviewer, it seems, had problems accepting Taim’s ability to witness, while in his comatose state, occurrences not just in his hospital room, but elsewhere in the city.  “But perhaps that . . . is just a reviewer being too literal,” the journalist offered.  (Ya think?)  Finkle also noted that “the family bouts are surprisingly out of the ordinary” and complained that they “don’t lift the drama to an impressively higher dramaturgical level.”  He concluded that “While I Was Waiting reaches no easy conclusions.  How could it?” Finkle asked, pointing out, “In reflecting the uncertainty suggested in the title, it acquires the poignancy shared by a group of people who love their country but remain adrift amid its tragic upheaval.  Al Attar keeps this element present right up to the final, heartbreaking fade-out.”