Back
on 9 April 2010, I published an article I called simply “Writing” on ROT.
I confessed in the article that I’d been a college writing teacher
starting back in the mid-1980s (which happened to coincide with the dawn of the
personal computer era). Why
did I teach writing, and “freshman composition” in particular? It’s really a matter of practicality. I’m firmly and unshakably convinced that the
ability to write simply and clearly anything from an office memo to a Ph.D.
dissertation to the latest journalistic exposé is still an absolute necessity
in our world. I’m also equally convinced
that few people who are confronted with this task today, in school or business,
can do it so that readers can understand the result easily, if they can read it
at all.
For
decades, advocates of the craft of writing have bemoaned the loss of the art of
letter-writing. Well, matters are far
worse. It’s not just letters that people
don’t write well anymore, it’s anything.
And it isn’t even a matter of artful writing—it’s just plain
writing. Writing that can be read. Writing that can be understood. Writing that communicates. It isn’t being done because it isn’t
encouraged (God forbid it should be required!) in high school or, sadly, even
in college. Letter-writing died because
the telephone made communication possible without writing, and memos and
telegrams made brevity not just the soul of wit, but a financial
necessity. (E-mail, though it actually
requires a form of writing, seems to lead people to dispense with the kind of
verbal composition old-fashioned letter-writing encouraged. I won’t even address texting or Twitter.) Writing in general, however, is dying simply
because few people care what gets put on paper, not to mention computer screens. Most students seem convinced that writing is
nothing they need be concerned about.
Unless you’re going to be a writer of some kind, you’ll never have to do
it. Besides, isn’t the computer going to
make words obsolete anyway? That’s
essentially what one of my students, a computer-science major, told me. I’m afraid all these naïve youngsters are in
for a great shock when they hit the world—and have to write something.
Scientists
and mathematicians have to write—and some even do it voluntarily, beyond the
academic requirement of publishing in professional journals. The late Carl Sagan was chastised by some of
his colleagues because his books and articles, and especially his well-received
TV series Cosmos, popularized science
for the layman. Far from opprobrium, I
say that’s cause for praise and gratitude—speaking as a scientific layman
myself. (That computer student was in my
class in the ’80s, before the advent of the Internet. A quick glance at the World Wide Web today
will reveal how relevant words are to the cyber world—the ’Net is positively
overflowing with words. They may not all
be any good, but somebody writes all that content.)
Businessmen
and corporate executives write, too.
Aside from all those interoffice memos and quarterly reports, some
leaders of commerce have written books (Lee Iacocca, the CEO of
Chrysler, published his autobiography in 1984 and real-estate tycoon Donald
Trump wrote The Art of the Deal in
1987). Nearly every presidential
candidate has put out a biographical book on the eve of his campaign (Barack
Obama, Dreams from My Father, 2004; John McCain, Faith
of My Fathers, 1999). Some
politicians have even been known to write their own speeches. And lawyers have to write prodigious numbers
of briefs—and a few have been reprimanded in court and even penalized by judges
who didn’t appreciate their bad writing.
(A 2004 New York Times report
entitled “Judge Finds a Typo-Prone Lawyer Guilty of Bad Writing” recounted that
a federal judge in Philadelphia docked an attorney’s payment for submitting
written filings with many errors, as well as “vague, ambiguous, unintelligible,
verbose and repetitive” prose. Hah!)
Not writing shrinks the mind, and someone has to put a stop to this trend. That’s why I taught writing. I believe in the need, and I myself have experienced the struggle to overcome the lack of real training in an essential skill. (That’s fundamentally what “Writing” was about.) After all, I wasn’t a writer when I started out on this track, either, but even I found I needed to write for all kinds of reasons and to all kinds of purposes. If I could make that need clear to a few students, even if I didn’t manage to teach them anything about writing, I would have accomplished something worthwhile. And, besides, I have to read all that unintelligible junk everyone’s turning out. It’s a good way of fighting back.
Not writing shrinks the mind, and someone has to put a stop to this trend. That’s why I taught writing. I believe in the need, and I myself have experienced the struggle to overcome the lack of real training in an essential skill. (That’s fundamentally what “Writing” was about.) After all, I wasn’t a writer when I started out on this track, either, but even I found I needed to write for all kinds of reasons and to all kinds of purposes. If I could make that need clear to a few students, even if I didn’t manage to teach them anything about writing, I would have accomplished something worthwhile. And, besides, I have to read all that unintelligible junk everyone’s turning out. It’s a good way of fighting back.
Of
course, there’s a deeper value to learning to write decently, beyond the
practicality of expressing yourself to others in clear, straightforward
prose—in the office, in the classroom, even occasionally at home. Writing well is the same as thinking
well. Writing clearly is the same as
thinking logically. Writing—composing,
selecting, arranging, and putting together words and ideas—could as well be
called puzzle-and-problem-solving.
That’s relevant no matter what discipline you work in—even, I trust,
computer science.
Make no mistake: Writing is an art. Much of it can’t be taught in the
conventional sense, though it can be learned. There aren’t any formulas for good writing,
and teachers aren’t there to provide The Answers. There are no Answers—and, if there were, neither
I nor any other teacher would know them any more than any student does, since
my solutions wouldn’t be their solutions.
In the world of writing, no two writers accomplish a task the same way
and no two readers respond to a written work the same way. If they did, we’d never innovate, make
anything new, or progress from where we stand now. The Truth changes and Knowledge expands. My function as a teacher was to ask
questions. If, by inadvertence, I happened
to say something that sounded like a Truth or everlasting Knowledge, I should
immediately have been called to account.
Writing can also be a way to work out
on paper or screen thoughts, ideas, questions, or impressions I have from any
source. Writing often serves two
complimentary functions: a means of expression and a means of discovery. In early versions, I can explore what I
think, feel, or know about something. I
approach this kind of writing task as an inquiry and an exercise in
problem-solving This happens to me often
when I sit down to write the performance reports I publish on ROT.
I won’t necessarily have fixed notions of what I think about the topic,
say a play or performance, when I start out, and I probably won’t know exactly
how I want to approach expressing myself about it. That’s what drafting and revising is
for—finding out what I think about something.
After I’ve begun to work out what I think and what I want to say, I’ll
start to find the best way to express it.
This is where logic and clear thinking comes into play. To put it succinctly, first I find out what I
want to say, then I find out how to say it.
I find that the first part of the process does a great deal to determine
the second part.
(In my classes, I often used to
paraphrased the comedian Gracie Allen here: How
do I know what I think until I see what I write? A more recent pop reference is also apt, from the 2000 movie Finding Forrester in which Sean Connery played William Forrester, a
reclusive writer who tutors Jamal Wallace, a talented high school student
played by Rob Brown. In Mike Rich’s
screenplay, Forrester advises Wallace: “No
thinking. That comes later. You write your first draft with your heart;
you rewrite with your head. The first
key to writing is to write—not to think.”
In both statements, the implication is that writers start out by
figuring out what they feel about their subject, then they figure out the best
way to say it.)
At bottom, all writing is basically
the same: an attempt to communicate something to someone. The only practical differences between one
type of writing and another are the purposes (the “something” to be
communicated) and the audience (the “someone” for whom it’s intended). But provocative writing goes beyond this
preliminary task. I used to explain to
my students that writing is a kind of conversation in print. One writer says something and another picks
up the idea, or a part of it, and says something else, and so on. That’s how new knowledge is created, I told
them. I challenged my composition
students to follow this paradigm. Add
something to the dialogue, I admonished them: argue with the writers they read,
expand on their thoughts, show how their ideas relate to or differ from someone
else’s or their own. Examine in detail a
small part of what the other writers said, or expand those ideas beyond the
authors’ limits and show how the ideas function (or don’t) in a world outside
the authors’ boundaries. I expected them
to go off on a tangent—imagine, dream, create.
In short—THINK. Go out on a limb.
Stick their necks out. Dare to make their readers think and wonder
anew. Take a chance on being wrong, I
told the student writers—but also take a chance on discovering something new
and exciting. This is where the
challenge of writing expands the mind.
I
used to be asked sometimes, usually by a department chair or some other
academic administrator, to outline my “philosophy of teaching writing.” Well, none of this amounts to much of a
philosophy. The fact is, I’m not sure I
have a coherent philosophy of teaching writing in the sense this question seems
to mean; if I do, then the Little Dutch Boy had a philosophy of flood
control. Maybe I should have developed
one I could haul out whenever someone asked, but I thought I’d wait until I knew
what I was doing a little better. I’m
still trying to develop a writing technique, let alone a philosophy—and
practice always precedes theory, not vice versa. Let’s remember what we got when we tried to
put the theory cart before the practice horse: Prohibition and the Edsel.
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