I suppose most people, especially anyone reading an
ostensibly theater blog, knows that Tennessee Williams’s mid-century plays Summer and Smoke and The Eccentricities of a Nightingale are
related texts. If you read my blog post “The Lost Première
of The Eccentricities of a Nightingale” (20 March 2010), you certainly know this. That article recounts some of the process by
which Williams developed Summer and Smoke
and then transformed it into Eccentricities. There’s a good deal more to that progression,
however, and it’s much more complex and intricate than a superficial account
suggests. From my research on the two
plays, which resulted in the chapter on them in Phillip C. Kolin’s Tennessee
Williams: A Guide to Research and Performance (Greenwood Press, 1998) and “The Lost Première” (Journal of American
Drama and Theatre, Spring 1999), I’ve pieced together the story of that
nearly unique circumstance.
Tennessee Williams was a habitual rewriter and recycler. Many of his plays were developed through several
versions and forms. Quite a number
started out as short stories (the 1961 play Night of the Iguana was
adapted from a 1948 story of the same title), others as one-acts (1952’s The
Enemy: Time became Sweet Bird of Youth in 1959, and the 1953
full-length Camino Real started as the one-act Ten Blocks on the Camino Real in 1949), and one famously
began life as a screenplay (The Gentleman Caller for MGM in 1943 was the
basis for The Glass Menagerie in 1944).
Almost all of Williams’s plays exist in two or more variations, usually
considered an "acting" version for production and a literary version for reading (Summer
and Smoke is one of these; the Broadway première in 1948 generated the
shorter text, but José Quintero’s long-running Off-Broadway revival in 1952 was
produced from the longer, “reading” edition); however, a few even rendered two
separate scripts with different titles after the playwright revised and rewrote
them, often after initial productions. Seventeen
years after Battle of Angles, Williams’s first professionally produced
play, closed on opening night in Boston in 1940, his revised “new play based on
an old one,” Orpheus Descending, opened on Broadway. (I’m not even counting here the plays
Williams used as the bases for films such as 27 Wagons Full of Cotton,
1946, which the dramatist redeveloped for the movie Baby Doll in 1956,
or The Fugitive Kind, Williams’s 1959 film adaptation of Orpheus
Descending—using a title he borrowed from a 1937 play of his with a
completely different plot.)
Williams authority Nancy Tischler wrote that the playwright
“does not abandon an unsuccessful or incomplete work”: “I revise continually,
because I’m never quite satisfied,” the dramatist himself attested. “Finishing a play, you know, is like
completing a marriage or a love affair,” he once said. “You feel very forsaken by that, that’s why I
love revising and revising, because it delays the moment when there is this
separation between you and the work.” In
his introduction to Williams’s Collected Stories (1985), many of whose pieces
had been reworked a dozen times or more over many years, Gore Vidal asserted: “I
once caught him in the act of revising a short story that had just been
published. ‘Why,’ I asked, ‘rewrite what’s
already in print?’ He looked at me,
vaguely, then said, ‘Well, obviously it’s not finished.’” He was such an inveterate reworker that one of
his friends dubbed him “Tenacity” Williams.
But no other of Williams’s plays resulted in two independent
scripts that generated such impassioned comparisons and which are still today
seen as competing texts for the attention and admiration of theater
professionals and audiences than Summer
and Smoke and The Eccentricities of a
Nightingale. In fact, the one-act
predecessors of the full-length plays we know are almost never staged (Ten Blocks is performed in schools as if
it were a cut-down version of Camino Real)
and Battle of Angels, the early
version of the better-known Orpheus
Descending, is not in many theaters’ repertoires since it failed the first
time around. Summer and Smoke and Eccentricities,
however, are both fairly frequently produced and there’s a rigorous debate
every time one is staged about which play is better and which one people like
more. (In Williams’s estimation, Eccentricities
“is less conventional and melodramatic,” but which is “better” is pretty much a
toss-up, depending entirely on taste and personal interest. Even Williams vacillated.) Among Tennessee Williams’s works, that only
occurs with regard to these two plays, and the wonderful things is—both scripts
are readily available for production or reading. (When I did a production of The Wood Demon, Anton Chekhov’s early
version of Uncle Vanya, in 1976, we
had to use a photocopy of the translation prepared for the Actors’ Company’s U.K.
revival because the published text was long out of print. Even the Russian-language version, which I
consulted, was hard to locate.) A few
other playwrights have multiple versions of related plays in print, such as
William Inge, who rewrote the Pulitzer Prize-winning Picnic (1957) into the more obscure Summer Brave (1962; produced 1975), which was actually an early
version of the better-known script that Inge resuscitated (if you can follow
that), but even here the second in the pair is seldom done and little known.
All this makes the pairing of Summer and Smoke and Eccentricities
of a Nightingale all the more fascinating to examine. Not just why did Williams go from Summer and Smoke to Eccentricities—a simple (and incomplete) answer to that would be
that Summer failed in its first
Broadway outing—but how did he get from Summer
and Smoke to Eccentricities? The explanation, in my analysis, has as much,
if not more, to do with the great writer’s personality as it does with
circumstances and professional considerations.
In order to lay out the transformation as I perceive it, I
have to recover some of the ground I reported superficially in “The Lost
Première.” Bear with me if you’ve
already read this; it all links up in the end.
Williams developed Summer and Smoke from a short story, “The Yellow Bird,” published
in 1947, which introduces Alma Tutwiler (the name Winemiller first appears in
the short story “One Arm,” published in 1948) as an incipient spinster and
daughter of a small-town Southern minister.
Aside from literary recycling, most of Williams’s writing also contains
elements of his life and the lives of his family and neighbors, but next to the
specifically autobiographical Glass
Menagerie, none of the dramatist’s major plays are as tied to his private history
as are the two Alma Winemiller plays. The
character of Alma, for instance, contains elements of both Williams’s mother,
Edwina, who in her youth had been called a nightingale, and his cherished sister,
Rose; the egocentric hedonist of Summer and Smoke, John, is a portrait
of Williams’s father, Cornelius Coffin Williams, the traveling salesman who
preferred carousing to domesticity, and at the same time, the elder Dr.
Buchanan, a remote and cold father, depicts another aspect of C. C. Williams. The Reverend Winemiller is inspired by (but
not a portrait of) Williams’s beloved grandfather, Rev. Walter Dakin. (Port Gibson, Mississippi, where Reverend
Dakin served as Episcopal minister from 1902-05, had a famous landmark: the
steeple of the Presbyterian church was topped by “an enormous gilded hand with
its index finger pointing straight up, accusingly, at—heaven,” as Alma
describes her father’s Glorious Hill Episcopal church in Eccentricities.) The
foundation of Summer and Smoke,
in fact, are the tales of Edwina Williams about her youth in Port Gibson
and Natchez, Mississippi.
In 1916, the year in which the play is set, the Williamses
were living with Edwina’s parents, Walter and Rose Otte Dakin, in Clarksdale,
Mississippi, the town which became Glorious Hill. Like Reverend Winemiller in Summer and
Smoke, Reverend Dakin was the Episcopal minister of the town and like “The
Nightingale of the Delta,” Williams grew up at the rectory. Reverend Dakin’s father had been a small-town
doctor like the Drs. Buchanan and Rose Dakin had taught piano and voice like
Alma. There were Tutwilers in
Clarksdale, and other names from Williams’s life appear in the play: Williams’s
own first love was Hazel Kramer and the salesman in Summer and Smoke is
Archie Kramer (who, like the playwright’s father, is a commercial drummer for a
shoe company); Rosa Gonzales shares her first name with Williams’s sister and
grandmother; and Williams, himself, had a hot-tempered lover, Pancho Rodriguez
y Gonzalez (the inspiration for Stanley Kowalski in A Streetcar Named Desire), in the 1940’s.
Williams began composing Summer and Smoke, originally
entitled A Chart of Anatomy, in St. Louis as early as February or March
1944. As was his habit, he continued to
work on the script—in 1945 in Mexico, where he went to recuperate from a
cataract operation, and in Texas, where he met with Margo Jones in Dallas; in
New Orleans; in Taos, New Mexico; on Nantucket Island, Massachusetts, in 1946, where
he shared a cottage with Carson McCullers while she dramatized her novel The
Member of the Wedding; and on until well after its successful Dallas
première in 1947. (A typescript of Summer
and Smoke in the theater archive of New York Public Library is labeled
“Rome Version (March 1948)” and hand-annotated “Produced by Margo Jones at the
Music Box Theatre, 6 October, 1948.”)
Summer and Smoke’s world première was presented by
Jones and her Theatre ’47 at the Gulf Oil Theatre in Dallas on 8 July 1947. The
original cast included Katherine Balfour as Alma and Tod Andrews as John, with
the appearance of Jack Warden as the waiter at the Moon Lake Casino. It was a significant success, garnering even
a laudatory review in the New York Times and extending its scheduled
run, but because Streetcar had already opened on Broadway that December,
the transfer of Summer and Smoke to New York’s Music Box Theatre was
delayed until 6 October 1948, when nearly every critic unfavorably compared it
not only to Streetcar but also to The Glass Menagerie. Though they praised Jo Mielziner’s set and
the performance of Margaret Phillips, who replaced Balfour as Alma, the
production closed on 1 January 1949 after 100 performances. (The production marked an early appearance of
Anne Jackson, who played Nellie Ewell.)
Most critics condemned Williams for re-covering in Summer
and Smoke the ground he previously covered more movingly and magically in Menagerie
and more dynamically and powerfully in Streetcar. Alma was seen as a wan successor to Laura and
a pale precursor to Blanche, and some reviews felt that Williams had overlooked
the characters in favor of a theme which becomes unclear because the characters
don’t actually represent the ideas Williams intended to place in opposition. The overall point was often deemed too
obvious, with schematic characters representing superficial traits making a
simplistic statement. Several critics
remarked that Summer and Smoke’s short scenes don’t cohere into a whole
drama. The play’s too symmetrical and
too pat, they said, and the reversals too neat; Williams, some charged, had
composed an elementary psychology lecture, not a play, because the text is
larded with such obvious symbols.
Having sailed for Gibraltar in December 1948 with his
long-time lover, Frank Merlo (the basis for Alvaro Mangiacavallo in The
Rose Tattoo), and his friend, writer-composer Paul Bowles (who composed the
music for Summer and Smoke), Williams
was in Fez, Morocco, when he received the telegram announcing the closing. He was depressed, according to his brother Dakin,
but the character of Alma Winemiller was indelibly imprinted on his soul. Indeed, Alma means ‘soul’ in Spanish, as
Williams points out in the script, and the character was, indeed, the writer’s
soulmate. She “seemed to exist somewhere
in my being,” he wrote, and later, during rehearsals for the Broadway premiere
of Eccentricities, Williams candidly acknowledged, “Look, I’m
Alma.” As Williams explained, “You’re
totally absorbed in the play or the novel or the piece of writing” so that it
becomes “the center of your life.” Williams
confessed once that “I cannot write any sort of story unless there is at least
one character in it for whom I have physical desire.” That suggests that once having conceived of
this desire, it was hard, even perhaps impossible to let it go. I don’t know which character in Summer and Smoke would have attracted
the playwright physically—perhaps John Buchanan, Jr.—but Williams frequently
acknowledged that his emotional connection to this story was the Nightingale of
the Delta, and that relationship was likely just as compelling for the writer
as physical attraction. Numerous critics
have asserted that Alma was Williams’s favorite character of all those he
created, including Blanche, Laura, and Maggie the Cat. Even Williams himself admitted, “Alma is my
favorite—because I came out so late and so did Alma, and she had the greatest
struggle.” He could not let her go.
Ronald Hastings, theatre correspondent of London’s
Daily Telegraph in the 1960s and
’70s, reported that Williams “did not, eventually, like his play, but he liked
the characters and decided to write another play for them.” So, while on one of his frequent retreats to
Rome in the summer of 1951, the dramatist continued to rework Summer and
Smoke. Correspondence from Williams to
producer Cheryl Crawford and his agent Audrey Wood between January and
September 1951 affirm that he’d completed a new version of the script.
Around New Years 1951, Williams wrote Crawford, who was
producing The Rose Tattoo on Broadway at the time, “I am still working
on the new ‘Summer’. It has turned into
a totally new play, even the conception of the characters is different,” and in
June, he wrote: “I am doing a completely new version, even changing the
title as it now takes place in winter, and I think I have a straight, clean
dramatic line for the first time, without the cloudy metaphysics and the
melodrama that spoiled the original production.” By August, Williams was writing to Wood that
he’d completed a draft of the new script, which he was still calling Summer
and Smoke, and by September, he must have finished the revision because he
wrote Crawford that he didn’t know which version the London company would
present, “the new or old one.”
Producer H. M. Tennant’s London première of Summer on 22 November was already in
preparation by this time, but Williams rushed off with his new version of the play. His friend Maria Britneva, who was playing
Rosemary at the Lyric Theatre, met the writer at the airport but he arrived too
late to substitute the new script for the one Britneva explained was “already
deep into rehearsals” under the direction of Peter Glenville (who, ten years
later, would direct the film version). “Crestfallen,”
as Williams described himself at the bad timing, the playwright recounts that
his friend told him, “Give me the new play and I’ll put it safely away . . . .” That script, which Williams says he didn’t
see again for “10 or 15 years,” the dramatist insists was The Eccentricities of a Nightingale.
I found no archival evidence that Williams focused on Eccentricities,
under either its old or new title, between 1951 and 1961, so apparently
Britneva, a model for Maggie the Cat of Cat
on a Hot Tin Roof, did keep the script hidden away during the intervening
decade. There doesn’t seem to be any
existing typescript of the revised Summer
and Smoke dated 1951 or 1952 in any archive I could search; the latest Summer and Smoke script of which I know
is the 1948 “Rome Version” and the earliest Eccentricities
edition is a 1961 text in the NYPL and New Directions archives. So Williams appears to have returned to his
new Alma play in about 1961. A
typescript of Eccentricities in the NYPL is dated 20 June 1961, and
letters in 1963 and 1964 to Robert MacGregor and Jay Laughlin at New
Directions, Williams’s publisher, state that he was working again on the play
he now called The Eccentricities of a
Nightingale. Except for a subtitle—The
Sun That Warms the Dark (A very odd little play)—the typescript is nearly
identical to the published 1964 text. A duplicate typescript is in the New Directions archive, but it was marked for
typesetting. One change from the NYPL copy
is that the subtitle had been crossed out, indicating that it never again
appeared on any version of the play—which, with one exception, it didn’t.
In any event, Williams reworked the new play between at
least 1961 and its première in 1964. (Even
though by this time, the play was officially entitled Eccentricities of a Nightingale, many people still referred to it
as Summer and Smoke.) New Directions announced in June 1964 the
publication of a single volume to comprise the texts of both Alma plays and the
New York Times’ report of the forthcoming publication noted that the new
play would receive its première later in the month. The Eccentricities of a Nightingale
premiered at the Tappan Zee Playhouse in Nyack, New York, on 25 June 1964 under
the direction of George Keathley. Edie
Adams, star of TV variety shows and Broadway musicals, was cast as Alma and Alan
Mixon played John. Because of an
early-morning backstage fire at the theater, however, the play’s scheduled
Broadway try-out of 10 days was truncated after the Friday night performance on
26 June. Eccentricities of a Nightingale got a world première of two
performances.
There wasn’t a lot of critical coverage for the début. The only New York City paper which reviewed
the Tappan Zee Playhouse opening of a new play by one of America’s most
renowned and respected playwrights was the New York World-Telegram and Sun. Review-writer Norman Nadel complained that
“‘Summer and Smoke’ never looked better than it does in comparison with this
revision” and that Williams “has made Alma and the play more, rather than less
melodramatic.” Nyack’s own Rockland
County Journal-News touted the “excitement” of seeing “variations on a familiar
theme” in Williams’s new version of Summer and Smoke with the “added
fillip” of “a new play, still in try-out.”
Reviewer Mariruth Campbell, citing part of the subtitle in the
production’s program, confirmed that Eccentricities was, indeed, “a very
odd little play”—the Nyack production was, in fact, the only one that ever
carried the subtitle as it appears on the title page of the NYPL collection’s
typescript. Campbell objected that the
play was “over-long” and noted that the cast “[a]ll worked valiantly to breathe
life” into the play.
Nevertheless, the new Alma play was launched, and publication
followed in February 1965. Over the rest
of the decade, there were revivals and regional premières of Williams’s new
play, and the British début was staged on 10 October 1967 at the Yvonne Arnaud
Theatre, Guildford, Surrey, directed by Philip Wiseman with Sian Phillips as Alma
and Kevin Colson as John. Then on 16
June 1976, the play’s profile was considerably raised when it was aired on PBS
for Great Performances’ Theatre in America, in collaboration
with San Diego’s Old Globe Theatre, starring Blythe Danner as Alma and Frank
Langella as John, directed by Glenn Jordan.
Following that broadcast, which Williams himself pronounced his “most
successful” television adaptation, a staging at Buffalo’s Studio Arena Theatre
starring Betsy Palmer as Alma and David Selby as John was transferred to
Broadway’s Morosco Theatre for a long-awaited New York City première on 23
November 1976. Directed by Edwin Sherin,
who’d staged a Long Island revival eight years earlier, the play was not well
received in New York despite a successful run in Buffalo, with evaluations ranging
from “a pleasing, small play” to “a pale outline of a play” whose “production
was in every way substandard.” Clive
Barnes, on the other hand, wrote in the New York Times that while he’d
expected Eccentricities just to be “a
rewrite of Summer and Smoke,” he was
surprised to find “a different play with different characters and even a
different theme.” Williams “new work effectively
knocks Summer and Smoke off the map,” Barnes declared, “except as a
literary curiosity.” The Times reviewer concluded, “This is a
warm, rich play full of that compassion and understanding and that simple
poetry of the heart that is Mr. Williams at his shining, gentle best. It may be an eccentric nightingale but its
tune is still sweet.” Brother Dakin
recalls that Williams felt good about Barnes’s response: “It was the best
Broadway reaction he had received in a long time.” Nevertheless, The Eccentricities of a Nightingale on Broadway closed on 12
December after eight previews and only 12 regular performances.
Among the differences between Summer and Smoke and The
Eccentricities of a Nightingale, possibly the most discussed are the
changes Alma and John undergo. Alma, it
has been observed, evolves from hyper-conventional and old-fashioned but
essentially normal to truly eccentric.
John, on the other hand, mellows from a rebellious, hedonistic
egocentric to a decent, if somewhat dull, young man. The other significant alteration is the
replacement of John’s father in Summer and Smoke with his mother in Eccentricities.
We have seen that both John and his father are, in part, depictions
of Williams’s own father, the man who called him “Miss Nancy” and lost part of
an ear in a fight over a card game.
Shortly before C. C. Williams’s death in 1957, Williams acknowledged, he
stopped hating him and began to understand, even love him. This adjustment, Williams has confessed,
resulted from treatment by Lawrence Kubie, a Freudian psychoanalyst he began
seeing in 1957. As a consequence of his
treatment, Williams asserted, “I felt like a great load was lifted from my
mind.”
Williams saw Kubie every weekday for nearly a year, and,
according to Williams biographer Ronald Hayman, Kubie even telephoned his
patient on Saturdays and Sundays to check on him. During the time of this treatment, the writer
also began to become estranged from his mother, whom he had adored as a child
just as he had hated his father. He
described the shift in a 1961 radio interview with writer Studs Terkel: “My
homelife was dominated by a very wonderful but rather puritanical mother, who
was in conflict with a very wonderful but rather profligate father. . . . First I sided with the mother’s side and then
after my father’s death, for some strange reason, I began to see his point of
view better.” Under analysis, Williams
came to see that his very survival had depended on his father’s fighting spirit,
inherited, according to family lore, from 18th-century East Tennessee Indian
fighters like John Sevier (Revolutionary War officer and first governor of the
State of Tennessee), and the playwright himself later wrote of C. C. Williams:
“I wonder if he knew, and I suspect that he did, that he left me something far
more important [than inherited money], which was his blood in my veins? And of course I wonder, too, of there wasn’t
more love than hate in his blood, however tortured it was.”
As for Williams’s feelings toward his mother, he came to
blame Edwina for allowing his beloved sister’s lobotomy, which left Rose a
hopeless invalid, surviving in what Dakin Williams said his brother “considered
. . . a kind of living death.” Williams also
felt that Edwina, whom the playwright called in his 1975 Memoirs “a little Prussian officer in drag,” had alienated him from
his father and “that my mother had made me a sissy.” Under analysis, his affections shifted as did
the personas of the parental villains in the Alma plays, from the remote and
absent father in Summer and Smoke to
the imperious and controlling mother in Eccentricities
of a Nightingale. A similarly
striking change for the worse takes place between the Mrs. Winemiller of Summer and Smoke, whom critic Felicia
Londré characterizes as “a querulous and perverse child,” and the Mrs.
Winemiller of Eccentricities, who’s
become “a social liability.”
As Williams biographer Lyle Leverich asserts:
Although Tom’s mother and
grandmother were giving him the concrete support he needed, paradoxically it
was not so much their inspiration as his rage against his father that inflamed
his burning desire to write. Tennessee
Williams’s career could be called an act of revenge, until at length he entered
analysis, understood his sublimated love for his deceased father, and turned
his anger on his mother, thus changing the character of his plays.
It seems clear that Kubie’s influence on Williams’s feelings
for his parents are reflected in the shifts in character manifested in the
reworking of Summer and Smoke into Eccentricities. I contend that though he may have begun the
new play in 1951, he certainly continued to work on it during the years he
underwent psychoanalysis or just afterwards when he was still under the
psychoanalyst’s Freudian influence, and the completed script illustrates the
new-found Freudian outlook. Indeed, Williams
acknowledged that his plays “reflect somehow the particular psychological
turmoil I was going through when I wrote them.” Without a copy of the earlier revision from
1951 or ’52, it’s impossible to know for sure if that’s so, but that’s my sense
of Williams’s process.
Rather than a cold and distant father, for instance, John
now has a dominating, controlling mother, the “heavy” that theater historian W.
David Sievers pointed to in his psychoanalysis of the American stage as a
Freudian figure. John’s relationship
with Mrs. Buchanan in Eccentricities is nearly classic Oedipalism, a distinctly
Freudian concept. (It is also
significant that Mrs. Winemiller transforms from a childlike personality to a
potentially destructive one. Compare,
also, the pre-analysis mother, Amanda Wingfield in The Glass Menagerie, 1944, with the post-analysis Eccentricities
mothers. The most salient manifestation
of this attitude change is Violet Venable, Sebastian’s dragon-lady mother in Suddenly,
Last Summer, 1958.) Sievers also identifies as Freudian
developments “the dethroning of motherhood and the liberation of children from
possessive parents,” both of which appear in Eccentricities but not so much in Summer and Smoke. John,
himself, is no longer the undisciplined savage that was Williams’s other image
of his father. Together, Summer and
Smoke and The Eccentricities of a Nightingale are a study of a
shifting parent-child relationship, a depiction of Williams’s own vacillating
allegiance.
With the elimination of the fiery Gonzaleses, furthermore,
the violence of Summer and Smoke is
also eliminated in Eccentricities . (The Daily Telegraph announcement of the British première of Eccentricities
was even entitled “Unviolent Williams.”) There’s no longer, for instance, a stabbing
or shooting, and the Moon Lake Casino episode has been replaced with a visit to
a cheap hotel. The excision of the
violence of Summer and Smoke, a
hallmark of Williams writing since the beginning, from Eccentricities was almost certainly also a direct response to
Williams’s treatment under Kubie. “If I
am no longer disturbed myself, I will deal less with disturbed people and
violent material,” Williams acknowledged in a 1958 interview in the New York
Herald Tribune. (This outcome of the psychoanalysis didn’t last long,
as Williams returned to writing about violence in later plays like Suddenly,
Last Summer and Sweet Bird of Youth. In 1959, after the playwright had stopped
seeing Kubie, he wrote that in the previous 19 years, “I have only produced
five plays that are not violent: The Glass Menagerie, You
Touched Me, Summer and Smoke, The Rose Tattoo and, recently
in Florida, a serious comedy called Period of Adjustment, which is still
being worked on.” Most critics would
argue with his appraisal of Summer and
Smoke—unless, of course, the playwright meant the “new” Summer and Smoke which was actually Eccentricities of a Nightingale and which had been stashed away by
this time for eight years.)
Another shift that takes place between Summer and Smoke and Eccentricities
is the one from a summer setting to a winter one. It’s less clear that Kubie’s therapy had an
effect on this change, especially since Williams noted that it had already
taken place in the 1951 script on which he was working in Rome that June. Nevertheless, it reflects a change in the
writer’s psychological adjustment—as well as the manifestation of his lifelong
bugaboo, the destructiveness of “life’s destroyer, time.” As Williams said to New York Post writer Robert Rice in 1958: “It haunts me, the
passage of time. . . . I think time is a
merciless thing. I think life is a
process of burning oneself out and time is the fire that burns you.” (Remember that his one-act precursor to Sweet Bird was entitled The Enemy: Time.) Summer and winter echo the two aspects of
Alma: fire and ice, and the passage from one to the other accompanies Alma’s
passing from “brief bloom to . . . decay.”
With the change from a summer setting to a winter one came
also the title change. With that was
also the elimination of a focus, almost an obsession, in which Williams engaged
in Summer and Smoke: the life, and
particularly the death by suicide, of poet Hart Crane. The title of Summer and Smoke is adapted from a line from Crane’s poem “Emblems of Conduct” and Crane, a homosexual like
Williams, drowned himself on 27
April 1932 in a moment of deep despair by throwing himself overboard
while aboard ship in the Gulf of Mexico. (The line, “By that time summer and smoke were past,”
is from a stanza that seems to predict the poet’s own death.) Williams viewed Crane’s struggle to confront
a hostile and indifferent world as a reflection of his own and even left instructions,
which were ignored, that his body should be buried at sea near where Crane is
believed to have drowned. In the 1937 one-act play Escape (presented under the
title Summer at the Lake for its 2004 New York première; see my
report, “Uninhabitable Country: Five
By Tenn,” 5 March 2011), Williams depicts a young man who swims
out into the sea to his death, a clear reference to Crane’s suicide, an act
with which Williams was preoccupied. All
this is gone from Eccentricities and
I suspect that Kubie’s treatment had something to do with why Williams
deemphasized the poet’s watery death—perhaps because he’d come to know himself better.